prelaunch: style and copy updates

apossiblespace · Oct 14, 2024 · 4769c79 · 4769c79
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diff --git a/resources/public/css/style.css b/resources/public/css/style.css
@@ -15,6 +15,7 @@ body {
     line-height: 1.8em;
     background-color: var(--color-bg);
     color: var(--color-text);
+    padding: 4rem 4rem 1rem 4rem;
 }
 
 a {
@@ -26,6 +27,9 @@ a {
 
 footer {
     color: var(--color-text-subdued);
+    font-size: 0.8em;
+    line-height: 1.2em;
+    margin-top: 3rem;
     width: 100%;
     display: flex;
     flex-direction: row;
@@ -36,13 +40,32 @@ footer {
 
 .container {
     width: 100%;
-    margin: 1rem auto;
+    margin: 0 auto;
     max-width: 1200px;
 }
 
+.main {
+    display: flex;
+    flex-direction: row;
+    flex-wrap: nowrap;
+    justify-content: space-between;
+    gap: 1rem;
+}
+
+.illustration {
+    width: 50%;
+    p {
+        text-align: center;
+    }
+    img {
+        width: 100%;
+        max-width: 400px;
+    }
+}
+
 .signup {
     margin: 2rem auto;
-    width: 100%;
+    width: 50%;
     max-width: 500px;
 
     form {
@@ -98,17 +121,25 @@ footer {
     }
 }
 
-.illustration {
-    p {
-        text-align: center;
-    }
-    img {
-        width: 100%;
-        max-width: 400px;
-    }
+@media (max-width: 900px) {
+   .main {
+       flex-direction: column;
+   }
+
+   .illustration, .signup {
+       width: 100%;
+   }
+
+   .signup {
+       margin-top: 0;
+   }
 }
 
 @media (max-width: 600px) {
+    body {
+        padding: 1rem;
+    }
+
     .signup form {
         flex-direction: column;
     }

diff --git a/src/tools/ifs/parts/layouts/main.clj b/src/tools/ifs/parts/layouts/main.clj
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
    [:head
     [:meta {:charset "utf-8"}]
     [:meta {:name "viewport" :content "width=device-width, initial-scale=1"}]
-    [:meta {:name "description" :content "Toolkit for IFS practitioners and their clients"}]
+    [:meta {:name "description" :content "Parts is a mapping tool for IFS practitioners to keep track of, visualise, and explore the relationships between their clients’ parts."}]
     [:link {:rel "icon" :sizes "192x192" :href "/images/icons/favicon.png"}]
     [:link {:rel "apple-touch-icon" :href "/images/icons/favicon.png"}]
     [:title (str title " — Parts")]

diff --git a/src/tools/ifs/parts/pages.clj b/src/tools/ifs/parts/pages.clj
@@ -21,20 +21,22 @@
   (-> (response/response
        (html
            (layout
-            "Home Page"
+            "Mapping tools for IFS practitioners and their clients"
             (header)
             [:section.hero
              [:h1
               {:align "center"}
               "Understand your clients’ parts and their relationships"]]
-            [:div.illustration
-             [:p
-              [:img {:src "/images/system-illustration.svg"}]]
-             [:h3.hook
-              {:align "center"}
-              [:strong "Parts"]
-              " is a tool for IFS practitioners to keep track of, visualise, and explore the relationships between their clients’ parts."]]
-            [:section.signup
-             [:p "Please enter your email below to join the private beta test."]
-             (waitlist-signup-form ".signup")]
+            [:div.main
+             [:section.illustration
+              [:p
+               [:img {:src "/images/system-illustration.svg"}]]]
+             [:section.signup
+              [:h3.hook
+               [:strong "Parts"]
+               " is a mapping tool for IFS practitioners to keep track of, visualise, and explore the relationships between their clients’ parts."]
+              [:p
+               [:strong "Parts"]
+               " is being actively developed, and we would love to have your feedback! Please enter your email below to join the private beta test."]
+              (waitlist-signup-form ".signup")]]
             (footer))))))