Fix grammar and spelling issues - #254
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looks good aside from questions
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Are you interesting in fixing this PR and making it mergeable? |
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Yes I will do that later tonight :) thanks for the reminder! |
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| The final proposal is presented the following week, and ballots are distributed for a Balloted Two-Thirds Vote with two-thirds quorum as described in \ref{Balloted Vote}. | ||
| If two or more modifications would conflict with one another, at the discretion of the Maintainers, ballots are distributed for a Balloted Vote with two-thirds quorum, and a winner is selected as described in \ref{Ranked Choice}. | ||
| The ballots are collected for a minimum of a forty-eight hour period. | ||
| The ballots are collected for a minimum of forty-eight hours. |
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I actually don't like this sentence at all. This change is fine, but I think the sentence should be something like The voting period lasts at least forty-eight hours. That needs work as well, but it seems weird to say that ballots must be collected (continuously?) for a certain amount of time.
| Active Members must participate in at least one major project. | ||
| Members are required to submit a description for this major project to E-Board for approval. | ||
| As an alternative to this requirement, members may instead assist on a large number of CSH activities and projects. | ||
| As an alternative to this requirement, members may instead assist with a large number of CSH activities and projects. |
| \item If E-Board decides through an E-board Vote not to present the nomination at a House Meeting, the selection process ends and the candidate does not become a member. | ||
| \item If the nomination is presented at a House Meeting for discussion, a Two-Thirds Vote with two-thirds quorum is held to determine whether the nomination is accepted. | ||
| Ballots are distributed and voting must remain open for a minimum of a forty-eight hour period. | ||
| Ballots are distributed and voting must remain open for a minimum of forty-eight hours. |
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This one is fine, maybe copy this version above
| The duties and responsibilities of an E-Board member on leave are assumed using the process defined in \ref{Appointment of an Interim Director} until the member returns from their leave. | ||
| If the member returns before the end of the Standard Operation Session in which they started their leave, they may assume their position and the interim director is removed. % someone gets their position back if they come back during the year for which they were elected | ||
| If any point the member's leave is determined by E-Board to be detrimental to be operations of House, any E-Board member may propose an E-Board Vote to require a resignation from the member. | ||
| If any point the member's leave is determined by E-Board to be detrimental to the operations of House, any E-Board member may propose an E-Board Vote to require a resignation from the member. |
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Good, but also If at any point
| \asubsubsection{Selection of the Chairperson, Evaluations Director, Social Director(s), Financial Director, House Improvements Director, History Director, Research and Development Director(s), Public Relations Director} | ||
| \begin{enumerate} | ||
| \item The opening of the E-Board position(s) is announced at a House Meeting and nominations for the position are taken for a minimum of a seventy-two hour period. | ||
| \item The opening of the E-Board position(s) is announced at a House Meeting and nominations for the position are taken for a minimum of seventy-two hours. |
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I'm going to stop commenting, but make sure all the changes that look like this one are consistent.
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Summary of change(s):
Fixed grammar issues in 4.E.4, 4.E.6, and 9.B.
Also changed the wording of 5.A.1.A.2 for clarity.