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Co-authored-by: stayseesong <[email protected]>

Author: forstisabella

src/connections/destinations/index.md

@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ In order to override the default, check the destination settings pane in the Seg
 
 ## Sync modes
 
-In September 2024, Segment released a new sync modes capability that allows users to define how changes in the source should be sent downstream to your destination. Depending on which destinations you set up in Segment, you may need to choose a sync mode for your data. This configuration determines how Segment updates destination based on the source data. 
+Segment released a new sync mode capability that allows users to define how changes in the source should send downstream to your destination. Depending on which destinations you set up in Segment, you may need to choose a sync mode for your data. This configuration determines how Segment updates your destination based on the source data. 
 
 The available sync modes can vary based on the destination, integration type, and actions within the destination. For example, if you sync customer data, you might have the option to Insert, Update, or Upsert records.
 

src/connections/reverse-etl/setup.md

@@ -91,10 +91,10 @@ To create a mapping:
 2. Select the destination that you want to create a mapping for.  
 3. Click **Add Mapping**.
 4. Select the model to sync from.
-5. In the Define sync behavior section, select the **Action** you want to sync.
+5. In the **Define sync behavior** section, select the **Action** you want to sync.
       * Actions determine the information sent to the destination. The list of Actions are unique to each destination.
 6. Select which records to send to your destination after Segment completes extracting data based on your model.   
-   * As of September 2024, some destinations have [sync modes](/docs/connections/destinations/#sync-modes), which let you specify how Segment should send data to the destination. Sync modes are unique to each destination. 
+   * Some destinations have [sync modes](/docs/connections/destinations/#sync-modes), which let you specify how Segment should send data to the destination. Sync modes are unique to each destination. 
    * Destinations without sync modes let you select from the following options: 
      * Added records  
      * Updated records