PMM-requested changes

Author: forstisabella

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/website/javascript/custom-proxy.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ redirect_from: '/connections/sources/custom-domains/'
 strat: ajs
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-Custom proxies allow you to proxy Analytics.js and proxy all tracking event requests through your domain.
+Custom proxies allow you to proxy Analytics.js and all tracking event requests through your own domain.
 
 You cannot use custom proxy setup for Analytics.js CDN or Tracking API with device-mode destinations because it requires the destination's native scripts are loaded onto the client, and the requests are sent directly to the destination.
 

src/connections/sources/custom-domain.md

@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@ plan: custom-domain
 hidden: true
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-Custom Domain is a fully-managed service that enables you to configure a first-party subdomain over HTTPS to track event requests through your domain (for example, `cdp.mydomain.com`), instead of tracking events through Segment's default domain (`segment.com`). Tracking events through your domain lets you reclaim some of the first-party data lost to end user ad-blockers and browser privacy controls that block Segment's default domain. With complete first-party data comes a more complete view of your customer's behaviors, and can lead to more robust profiles, more accurate attribution, and, ultimately, greater ROAS. 
+Custom Domain is a fully-managed service that enables you to configure a first-party subdomain over HTTPS.  You can then track event requests through your own domain (for example, cdp.mydomain.com), instead of the default (segment.com). Tracking events through your own domain allows for more secure and complete first-party data collection by reclaiming first-party data lost to browser controls. With a more complete view of your customer behaviors, you can build more robust profiles for greater attribution and ROAS.  
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 ![A graphic that shows how Internet traffic moves back and forth from your domain, to your custom domain, then to Segment's CDN and Ingest APIs.](images/custom-domain.png)