Clarify language

Author: pwseg

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/website/javascript/cookie-validity-update.md

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ Analytics.js tries to detect when a page is about to be closed and saves pending
 
 When `disableClientPersistence` is set to `true`, Analytics.js won't store any pending events into `localStorage`.
 
-## Client side cookie methods (get, set, clear)
+## Client-side cookie methods (get, set, clear)
 
 To access or assign a value to a cookie outside of the standard Segment methods (track/identify/page/group), you can use the following methods. To access the cookie's value, pass an empty `()` at the end of the method. To assign the value, include the string value inside those parenthesis, for example, `('123-abc')`. To clear or remove the value for a specific field, pass in an empty value of its type. For example, for string `('')`, or for object `({})`.
 
@@ -142,22 +142,22 @@ To access or assign a value to a cookie outside of the standard Segment methods
 
 ## Storage Priority
 
-By default Analytics.js uses `localStorage` as its preferred storage location, with Cookies as a fallback when `localStorage` is not available or not populated. An in-memory storage is used as a last fallback if all the previous ones are disabled.
+By default, Analytics.js uses `localStorage` as its preferred storage location, with Cookies as a fallback when `localStorage` is not available or not populated. An in-memory storage is used as a last fallback if all the previous ones are disabled.
 
 Default Storage Priority:
 
 ```md
 LocalStorage -> Cookie -> InMemory
 ```
 
-Some scenarios might require to switch the priority of the storage systems.
+Some scenarios might require a switch in the storage systems priority:
 
 - Apps that move the user across different subdomains
 - Apps where the server needs control over the user data
 - User Consent
 - Availability
 
-The storage priority can be configured in the Analytics.js client using the `storage` property either globally or only for user or group data.
+You can configure the storage priority in the Analytics.js client using the `storage` property, either globally or only for user or group data.
 
 The `storage` property accepts an array of supported storage names (`localStorage`, `cookie`, `memory`) to be used in the priority order of the array.