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Co-authored-by: markzegarelli <[email protected]>

Author: stayseesong

src/connections/storage/warehouses/faq.md

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 ## Can I control what data is sent to my warehouse?
 
-Yes. For those of you who are on Segment's [Business plan](https://segment.com/pricing), you can choose which sources, collections, and properties sync to your data warehouse using [Warehouse Selective Sync](/docs/connections/storage/warehouses/warehouse-syncs/#warehouse-selective-sync).
+Yes. Customers on Segment's [Business plan](https://segment.com/pricing) can choose which sources, collections, and properties sync to your data warehouse using [Warehouse Selective Sync](/docs/connections/storage/warehouses/warehouse-syncs/#warehouse-selective-sync).
 
-Selective Sync helps manage what data is sent to each individual warehouse, allowing you to sync different sets of data from the same source to different warehouses.
+Selective Sync helps manage the data Segment sends to each warehouse, allowing you to sync different sets of data from the same source to different warehouses.
 
-Once a source, collection or property is disabled, Segment no longer syncs data from that source. Segment won't delete any historical data from your warehouse. When a source is re-enabled, Segment syncs all events since the last sync. This doesn't apply when a collection or property is re-enabled. Only new data generated after re-enabling a collection or property will sync to your warehouse.
+When you disable a source, collection or property, Segment no longer syncs data from that source. Segment won't delete any historical data from your warehouse. When you re-enable a source, Segment syncs all events since the last sync. This doesn't apply when a collection or property is re-enabled. Only new data generated after re-enabling a collection or property will sync to your warehouse.
 
 ## Can we add, tweak, or delete some of the tables?
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Your warehouse id appears in the URL when you look at the [warehouse destination
 
 ## How fresh is the data in Segment Warehouses?
 
-Your data will be available in Warehouses within 24-48 hours. The underlying Redshift datastore has a subtle tradeoff between data freshness, robustness, and query speed. For the best experience, Segment needs to balance all three of these.
+Data is available in Warehouses within 24-48 hours. The underlying Redshift datastore has a subtle tradeoff between data freshness, robustness, and query speed. For the best experience, Segment needs to balance all three of these.
 
 Real-time loading of the data into Segment Warehouses would cause significant performance degradation at query time because of the way Redshift uses large batches to optimize and compress columns. To optimize for your query speed, reliability, and robustness, Segment guarantees that your data will be available in Redshift within 24 hours.
 

src/connections/storage/warehouses/warehouse-syncs.md

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 ## Warehouse Selective Sync
 
-Warehouse Selective Sync allows you to manage the data that you send to your warehouses. You can use this feature to stop syncing specific events (also known as collections) or properties that aren’t relevant, and could be slowing down your warehouse syncs.
+Warehouse Selective Sync allows you to manage the data that you send to your warehouses. You can use this feature to stop syncing specific events (also known as collections) or properties that aren’t relevant, and may slow down your warehouse syncs.
 
 > info ""
 > This feature is only available to Business Tier customers. <br><br>You must be a Workspace Owner to change Selective Sync settings.
 
-With Selective Sync, you can customize which collections and properties from a source are sent to each warehouse. This helps you manage what data is sent to each individual warehouse, allowing you to sync different sets of data from the same source to different warehouses.
+With Selective Sync, you can customize which collections and properties from a source are sent to each warehouse. This helps you control the data that is sent to each warehouse, allowing you to sync different sets of data from the same source to different warehouses.
 
 > note ""
 > **NOTE:** This feature only affects [warehouses](/docs/connections/storage/warehouses/), and doesn't prevent data from going to any other [destinations](/docs/connections/destinations/).
 
-Once a source, collection, or property is disabled, Segment no longer syncs data from that source. Segment won't delete any historical data from your warehouse. When a source is re-enabled, Segment syncs all events since the last sync. This does not apply when a collection or property is re-enabled. Only new data generated after re-enabling a collection or property syncs to your warehouse.
+When you disable a source, collection or property, Segment no longer syncs data from that source. Segment won't delete any historical data from your warehouse. When you re-enable a source, Segment syncs all events since the last sync. This doesn't apply when a collection or property is re-enabled. Only new data generated after re-enabling a collection or property will sync to your warehouse.
 
 > warning ""
 > For each warehouse only the first 5,000 collections per source and 5,000 properties per collection are visible in the Selective Sync user interface. [Learn more about the limits](#selective-sync-user-interface-limits).