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@@ -210,16 +210,16 @@ Use Segment's [Delivery Overview](#delivery-overview) and [Alerting](#alerting)
 Delivery Overview is a visual observability tool designed to help Segment users diagnose event delivery issues for any event-streaming destination receiving events from Engage Audiences.
 
 Delivery Overview has three core features:
-- [Pipeline view](/docs/connections/delivery-overview/#pipeline-view): A visual overview of each step your data takes during the delivery process - from when your source receives audience events to when events are successfully delivered to your connected destination. 
-- [Breakdown table](/docs/connections/delivery-overview/#breakdown-table): If you select a step in the pipeline view, you can see more detail about the events that were processed at each pipeline step.
-- [Discard table](/docs/connections/delivery-overview/#discard-table): If you select an event in a breakdown table, you can see more details about the events that failed or were filtered out of your process and allows you to inspect samples of them.
+- [Pipeline view](/docs/connections/delivery-overview/#pipeline-view): A visual overview of each step your data takes during the delivery process - from when your audiences outputs events to when events are successfully delivered to your connected destination. 
+- [Breakdown table](/docs/connections/delivery-overview/#breakdown-table): If you select a step in the pipeline view, you can see more details about the events that were processed at each pipeline step.
+- [Discard table](/docs/connections/delivery-overview/#discard-table): If you select an event in a breakdown table, you can see more details about the events that failed or were filtered out of your process. You can also inspect samples of the discarded events.
 
 For more information about the breakdown and discard tables, see the [Delivery Overview](/docs/connections/delivery-overview/) documentation.
 
 To view Delivery Overview for an Audience:
 1. From your Segment workspace's home page, navigate to **Engage > Audiences**.
 2. Find an Audience, click the **(...)** menu, and select Delivery Overview. 
-3. On the Delivery Overview page, select the Audience dropdown to filter by a specific Audience, select the Date range dropdown to filter by a specific time period, or toggle the Show metrics as percentages toggle on to view your metrics as percentages. 
+3. On the Delivery Overview page, select the Audience dropdown to filter by a specific Audience, select the Date range dropdown to filter by a specific time period, or use the Show metrics toggle to view your metrics as percentages.
 
 #### Steps in the pipeline view
 
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ You can also further refine the data displayed on the pipeline view using the ti
 > Linked Audiences users can filter the Delivery Overview event pipeline by [Linked Audience events](/docs/engage/audiences/linked-audiences/#step-2c-define-how-and-when-to-trigger-an-event-to-your-destination). For more information, see the [Linked Audiences](/docs/engage/audiences/linked-audiences/#delivery-overview-for-linked-audiences) documentation.
 
 Audiences have the following steps in the pipeline view: 
-- **Events from audience**<sup>*</sup>: Events that Segment created for your activation. The number of events for each compute depends on the changes detected in your audience membership.
+- **Events that Segment created for your activation**<sup>*</sup>: The number of events for each compute depends on the changes detected in your audience membership.
 - **Filtered at source**: Events discarded by Protocols: either by the [schema settings](/docs/protocols/enforce/schema-configuration/) or [Tracking Plans](/docs/protocols/tracking-plan/create/). 
 - **Filtered at destination**: If any events aren’t eligible to be sent (for example, due to destination filters, insert function logic, and so on), Segment displays them at this step.
 - **Events pending retry**: A step that reveals the number of events that are awaiting retry. Unlike the other steps, you cannot click into this step to view the breakdown table.