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Author: brson

_posts/2017-02-09-Rust-1.15.1.md

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 [PIC]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Position-independent_code
 
 The problem with `as_mut_slice`, a three line function, was [discovered] just
-minutes after publishing Rust 1.15.0, and is a reminder that writing unsafe code
-is hard.
+minutes after publishing Rust 1.15.0, and is a reminder of the perils of writing
+unsafe code.
 
 [discovered]: https://www.reddit.com/r/rust/comments/5roiq7/announcing_rust_115/dd8vujs/