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Merge pull request #263 from quicwg/mirjak-patch-29
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draft-ietf-quic-ack-frequency.md

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{{QUIC-TRANSPORT}} specifies a simple delayed acknowledgment mechanism that a
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receiver can use: send an acknowledgment for every other packet, and for every
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packet that is received out of order (Section 13.2.1 of {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}).
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packet that is received out of order ({{Section 13.2.1 of QUIC-TRANSPORT}}).
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This does not allow a sender to signal its preferences or constraints. This
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extension provides a mechanism to solve this problem.
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ACK_FREQUENCY frame is lost, the sender is encouraged to send another
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ACK_FREQUENCY frame, unless an ACK_FREQUENCY frame with a larger Sequence Number
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value has already been sent. However, it is not forbidden to retransmit the lost
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frame (see Section 13.3 of {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}), because the receiver will ignore
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frame (see {{Section 13.3 of QUIC-TRANSPORT}}), because the receiver will ignore
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duplicate or out-of-order ACK_FREQUENCY frames based on the Sequence Number.
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A receiving endpoint MUST ignore a received ACK_FREQUENCY frame unless the
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Receiving an acknowledgment can allow a sender to release new packets into the
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network. If a sender is designed to rely on the timing of peer acknowledgments
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("ACK clock"), delaying acknowledgments can cause undesirable bursts of data
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into the network. In keeping with Section 7.7 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}, a sender
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into the network. In keeping with {{Section 7.7 of QUIC-RECOVERY}}, a sender
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can either employ pacing or limit bursts to the initial congestion window.
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## Loss Detection and Timers {#loss}
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at the sender to be delayed.
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A QUIC sender detects loss using packet thresholds on receiving an
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acknowledgment (Section 6.1.1 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}); delaying the
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acknowledgment ({{Section 6.1.1 of QUIC-RECOVERY}}); delaying the
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acknowledgment therefore delays this method of detecting losses.
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Reducing acknowledgment frequency reduces the number of RTT samples that a
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sender receives (Section 5 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}), making a sender's RTT estimate
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sender receives ({{Section 5 of QUIC-RECOVERY}}), making a sender's RTT estimate
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less responsive to changes in the path's RTT. As a result, any mechanisms that
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rely on an accurate RTT estimate, such as time-threshold loss detection (Section
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6.1.2 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}) or Probe Timeout (Section 6.2 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}),
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rely on an accurate RTT estimate, such as time-threshold loss detection ({{Section
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6.1.2 of QUIC-RECOVERY}}) or Probe Timeout ({{Section 6.2 of QUIC-RECOVERY}}),
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will be less responsive to changes in the path's RTT, resulting in either
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delayed or unnecessary packet transmissions.
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IMMEDIATE_ACK frame, which is a non-probing frame.
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An endpoint's congestion controller and RTT estimator are reset upon
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confirmation of migration (Section 9.4 of [QUIC-TRANSPORT]);
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confirmation of migration ({{Section 9.4 of QUIC-TRANSPORT}});
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this changes the pattern of acknowledgments received after migration.
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Therefore, an endpoint that has sent an ACK_FREQUENCY frame earlier in the

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