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             <h3>Rapid prototyping</h3>
             <p>Start small and explore new ideas to find your market fit. Haskell is a compact language with a large ecosystem of open-source libraries and tools
-               to get you started and keep you growing.
+               to get you started and help you growing.
                The strong type system makes it easy to write small and large programs that work, even when you don't like writing types &mdash; the compiler will figure it out.
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             <h3>Scale with ease</h3>
-            <p>From 1 to 100k users, and more. Haskell can take advantage of multi-core processors with ease and confidence
-               like no mainstream language can, and offers one of the best support for async, concurrent and parallel programming.
+            <p>From 1 to 100k users, and more. Haskell offers one of the best support for async, concurrent and parallel programming.
+               It can take advantage of multi-core processors with ease and confidence like no mainstream language can.
+               &mdash; while keeping complexity low as your user base and code base grows.
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             <h3>Maintain with confidence</h3>
-            <p>Fearless progress and refactoring over the long term. Haskell has one of the strongest type systems on the market to prevent mistakes
-               before they reach production, saving on total software lifetime costs. “If it compiles, it works.”&mdash;a Haskell proverb.
+            <p>Add complex features or refactor large parts of your code base reliably. Haskell has one of the strongest type systems on the market to prevent mistakes
+               before they reach production, saving on total software lifetime costs.&mdash;“If it compiles, it works.” and "Fearless refactoring", some Haskell proverbs.
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-            <h3>Bleeding edge</h3>
-            <p>Peek into some of the latest programming language innovations. Haskell has its roots in academia and research, and influences many popular languages later on.
-               Stay with safe, current best practices or try out next-generation programming techniques like Generalized Algebraic Data Types (GADT), Effect Systems, Linear Types and more to make your code even more reliable;
-               only when you need it and can tolerate the risk to get ahead: Haskell supports both.
+            <h3>Cutting edge</h3>
+            <p>Get a view into the latest programming innovations. Haskell has its roots in programming language research, has already influenced many popular languages and continues to do so.
+               Try out new programming techniques like Generalized Algebraic Data Types (GADT), Effect Systems, Linear Types and others for even more reliability or performance
+               &mdash; when you're curios or when you want to get ahead.
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-            <h3>Fun</h3>
-            <p>Software that works, scales, is elegant as well as easy to maintain helps to attract talent and keep your team motivated.
-               Haskell is a language that let's you express your ideas clearly and compactly, and teaches you a new way of thinking about programming. 
+            <h3>Delightful</h3>
+            <p>Software that works, scales and is easy to maintain helps you to attract talent and keep your team motivated.
+               Haskell is a language that let's you express your ideas clearly and teaches you a new way of thinking about programming. 
                If you work on a challenging project, you might as well have a good time.
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