chore: ✏️ Update choosing-dates.md with improved formatting and clarity (#581)

Signed-off-by: ChrisTineo <[email protected]>

Author: TineoC

planning/choosing-dates.md

@@ -5,9 +5,10 @@ When considering event dates for your KCD, there are many facotrs.
 Dependent on the country, some venues can easily book out 2 years in advance. Reminder: You may not announce your KCD until your contract with a venue is signed.
 
 ### Other KCDs in Your Region
-If you are in a large country, we now require that each KCD within the same country, should happening no closer than 2 months apart.
-If you are in Europe for example, and it is an easy trek to get to another KCD by traing (for example), or Asia Pacific and it is up to a 3-hour flight, then thesame standards apply.
-* [You can review upcoming KCD, CNCF and LF-hosted event dates here](https://events.linuxfoundation.org/about/community/?_sf_s=days)
+Plase make a note of the following:
+* If you are in a large country, we now require that each KCD within the same country should occur no closer than 2 months apart.
+* If you are in Europe, it is easy to travel to another KCD by train. Similarly, in the Asia Pacific region, a 3-hour flight also meets the same standard
+[You can review upcoming KCD, CNCF and LF-hosted event dates here](https://events.linuxfoundation.org/about/community/?_sf_s=days)
 
 ### Competitive Events
 Please utilize your organizer networks to explore surrounding events that may be happening at the same time, or within two-month's time. CNCF is only responsible for guiding you around other KCDs and CNCF & Linux Foundation-hosted events.