Language refinement to looping post

Author: chrisglein

_drafts/2025-06-30-Looping-May-2025.md

@@ -4,31 +4,31 @@ title: "Looping: May 2025"
 tags: music looping
 series: looping
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-Here are the loop jams I captured from the month of May. I actually had the pleasure of playing with a friend multiple times this month (that's a video for another day) but that did mean fewer solo loops than usual. A couple of these loops were however based on chord progressions from her songs. 
+Here are the loop jams I captured from the month of May. I actually had the pleasure of playing with a friend multiple times this month (that's a video for another day) but that did mean fewer solo loops than usual. A couple of these loops were however based on chord progressions from her songs, part of practicing to play more together.
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-I've been making and recording loops for a year, and dropping them on YouTube for at least half of that. But that's not a great format to give extra detail. So I'm going to try delving into that here on the lob to discuss my opinion on each loop, as well as the effects and thought process behind each. Do you think I should keep doing this? Give me feedback (as comments on the video or wherever you can find me) about which loops you liked the most (that's why they're numbered).
+I've been making and recording loops like this for a year, and dropping them on YouTube for at least half of that. But that's not a great format to give extra detail. So I'm going to try delving into that here on the lob to discuss my opinion on each loop, as well as the effects and thought process behind each. Do you think I should keep doing this? Give me feedback (as comments on the video or wherever you can find me) about which loops you liked the most (that's why they're numbered).
 
 ### Loop 1
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-This one has a relaxed slow vibe that is the sort I've really been enjoying lately. It's also got a longer repeat with the chord progression than most of my recent loops. Slow jam with some overdrive crunch and a bit of delay... I can sit in that groove for a long time.
+This one has a relaxed slow vibe that is what I've really been enjoying lately. It's also got a longer repeat with the chord progression than most of my recent loops, giving more space to be dynamic with the lead. A slow jam with a bit of overdrive crunch and some delay... I can sit in that groove for a long time.
 
 ### Loop 2
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-I don't start enough jams on the bouzouki. This one started with a simple riff on that, and then from there I just wanted to keep it acoustic. So acoustic baseline, a little bit of reverby trumpet. And the only place to go from there is keeping it acoustic by layering a jam with my Taylor.
+I don't start enough jams on the bouzouki. This one started with a simple riff, and then from there I just wanted to keep everything acoustic. So add an acoustic bass and a little bit of reverby trumpet (not an instrument I'm strong with, but something I love in the mix). And the only place to go from there is to keep it acoustic and layer on a jam with my Taylor.
 
 ### Loop 3
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-This chord progression is from a friend's song. We're intended to play this and other songs of hers at an upcoming small festival, so I thought I'd practice over it. This isn't really quite the right rhythm, but it provided enough to toy with. I went with a vibrato lead because the whole thing felt old timey.
+This chord progression is from my friend's song. We intend to play this and other songs of hers at an upcoming small festival, so I thought I'd practice over the core structure. This isn't really the right rhythm though (side effect of defaulting to using my rhythm looper pedal), but it provided enough to toy with. I went with a vibrato lead because the whole thing felt old timey.
 
 ### Loop 4
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-Starting with a bass line just by using the Pitch Fork to down octave the guitar. Add some tremolo chords and... we've got another slow jam. These days these are my favorite place to sit.
+I started with a bass line just by using the [Pitch Fork](https://www.ehx.com/products/pitch-fork/) to down-octave my guitar (a common option for when I just want to get moving quickly). Add some tremolo chords on that and... we've got another slow jam. These days these are my favorite place to sit.
 
 ### Loop 5
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-Another example of workshopping something over a chord progression from a song I'm supposed to be practicing. I liked the downward motion of the simple faux-bass. Given the arrangement a fuzzy guitar sounded appropriate. And if I'm not mistaken, this is when I got a Wave Machine and was interested in trying out some middle distorted tones.
+Another example of workshopping something over a chord progression from a song I'm supposed to be practicing. I liked the downward motion of the simple faux-bass. Given that arrangement, a fuzzy guitar sounded appropriate. And if I'm not mistaken, this is my trying out the [Wave Cannon](https://carolineguitar.com/product/wave-cannon-mkii/) to get some middle-of-the-road distorted tones.
 
 ### Loop 6
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-I try to film the whole process of creating the loop so I can pull the original samples later for the edit. This was an example where I had to step away after starting the loop and come back and recreate it. Which gives me a lot more ability to be precise in planning for an end destination (instead of what I usually do which is just layer until I'm happy). The key part was the second layer here with the fixed "pedal tone". Clean tone on these first bits, until a contrasting tremolo chord sequence comes in. Just a bit of overdrive for the lead tone, with reverb coming from the Afterneath if I'm not mistaken.
+I try to film the whole process of creating the loop so I can include the original samples for the edit. This was an example where I had got interrupted, had to step away after starting the loop, and come back and recreate it. Which gives me a lot more ability to be precise in planning for an end destination (instead of what I usually do which is just layer until I'm happy). The key part was the second layer here with the fixed "pedal tone" (not a single pedal note, but a stationary repeating section). It felt right to keep a clean tone on all those first bits, until the contrasting tremolo chord sequence came in. Just a bit of overdrive for the lead tone, with reverb coming from the [Afterneath](https://www.earthquakerdevices.com/afterneath) if I'm not mistaken.